Synopsis
Lornamarie in this twisty thriller, gripping, giddy style skilfully narrated the life of a man who practised his profession excellently well until his private life interfered with his success in all its ramifications.
It is the story of a bright and gifted boy, Segun, that will grip you as you read about how he grew up to become a doctor. It tells of his hard work with not so much to show for it as he struggled and battled his addiction to gambling with adverse consequences leaving a vacuum in his life. The author keeps you in suspense as the intriguing story unfolds.
Segun lived his life like a Candle in the Wind with his struggle and fought back from the edge of death, his recovery and then back to the inevitable end. Doctors are human, and so are we all.
You are glued to the book from the beginning right to the end as it exposes not only addiction to alcohol, drugs and gambling but also challenges that couples face in a marriage like childlessness and the consequences in various societies, infertility in marriages and treatment through in vitro fertilization.
Lornamarie used the humanitarian story to plead for a change to current American gun law with a hope that unfortunate stories similar to the storyline could be prevented to make the world a better place to live. The book touched on real-life issues such as miscarriage of justice, reckless endangerment with a firearm, dealing with grief, corruption, racism, counselling and rehabilitation — the use of alibi, insanity, depression and poor mental state as a defence during the criminal trial.
It is a well-known fact that the greatest dramas occur not on screens or stages, but rather in some courtrooms scenes, Lornamarie, in The Plea on Oath, brings these dramas alive.
Guest Post
Your checklist while writing suspense and great mystery novels
It was an interesting but tedious task plotting my new mystery and suspense novel The Plea on Oath, I have been inspired by great works of James Patterson, Lee Child, Laura Shapiro and Ayobami Adebayo.
James Patterson knew how to hold his audience in suspense, you will keep on guessing where he is heading, you just keep on turning pages. I once took one of his book Alert from the bedroom to the bathroom, then to the living room and then back to the bedroom. Just kept on reading till I finished.
Things to remember when writing a crime fiction thriller is that you make sure that the suspense drives the narrative and that it keeps your readers interested. Something has happened and how, where and who is responsible for what had happened. Getting all of that to your audience in a pleasurable and entertaining manner.
Making your readers laugh out loud is the way to go. Imagine you are the reader, put yourself in the position of a reader and see whether you find your book entertaining or not. I think every crime fiction writer should have a dint of comedy, horror and humour to a reasonable extent, otherwise readers will find the book a chore to read. You should create something to be anxious about.
Humour helps to balance the tension created by the crime scene and investigation.
Start your fiction thriller with a ‘bang’ I mean something serious has happened, make sure the incident is like a Tornado, cyclone, twister or whirlwind. The tension rises with controlled speed but balance things with reality of life, things that would make a normal day look real. Like a family sitting on the dining for a meal or your characters going out for a meal. Do your research on location so that there are no conflicts. I started The Plea on Oath with a tragic incident that occurred on a normal day, but in the middle of the night when most people have gone to sleep, no one saw it coming not even the writer knew where it was all heading!. That is the way to go, paint the picture with all the colours you need because the beginning will determine whether your reader continues or puts the book down. Segun was struck by a stray bullet in the middle of the night, the bullet pierced through the toilet window, you will initially think this is a direct attack to have him killed, it is believable isn’t it? What I wanted to make clear is that it is time for the American gun law to be revisited and changed for the good of all. How can Segun be gunned down in the comfort of his home by a stray bullet that came in through the window. The incident looked like a premeditated attack but that was arguable. Put the readers in a position of debate. Let them start guessing what the answer is. You should just continue to ‘show’ but not ‘tell’
Ensure that there are twists and turns in your thriller. That is the whole idea. Make sure to keep your story line flowing, by this I mean don’t stay on one location for too long, in an ideal world we move around, we travel, we go to work, we fly on the aeroplane, make it real with things happening around while you are creating your plots and scenes at the same time.
Don’t give away clues, be in control to hold your audience in suspense, something like ‘nobody knows’ not even you. Keep your audience on their guard.
If you can create speeches, then by all means do so, readers like hearing a good speech. When Shakespeare wrote Julius Caesar, the speeches made the drama interesting. I could never ever forget Anthony’s speech.
One of the reviewers of The Plea on Oath said, ‘The press interviews were intriguing’. People can deduce a lot of information from the questions that journalist ask. Press interviews is also a good review of what has happened during a court trial in my book. Journalist in most cases confirm what the readers are thinking.
Be sure to be clear with your knowledge of the time, any place or country you’ve chosen for your story, for example you will find me using United States as the country where the crime occurred (crime scene) because I wanted to appeal for a change to gun laws in America by narrating a story, one of the reasons why I wrote the book in the first place. I then created some scenes in the United Kingdom because I know professionals travel to England to study medicine and they end up going back to settle down in America to practice their profession. I also had to locate the place for funerals in Nigeria because Segun’s parents lived in Nigeria, he also got married in Nigeria, The Plea on Oath is full of twists and turns.
You should consider creating a suspense, don’t make the mystery too easy to solve, but sure that at the end, reveal the motive of the crime and be sure that the ending is clear on who committed the crime and why and how it was solved. Try to make your story the best it can be. Remember to describe your characters, having your characters developed to the fullest is an essential part of writing a good story and to making the characters believable, you can see in my story how I brought in Ben who was Segun’s best friend from childhood, how he got married to Yvonne. Ben’s parents lived in Nigeria and Ben even though a white boy grew up in Nigeria. He went to the same school as Segun. Both characters were developed in my story.
When you have gone through your story over and over again, cut out unnecessary fillers as you can.
Your work is ready! Good luck.
I hope you’ll find this checklist useful while writing your mystery novel.
Lorna Adekaiyaoja
About the Author
LornaMarie was born in Islington, London, she attended Marywood Grammar School and Methodist Girls High School, Lagos. In 1986 she bagged an award for emerging as the overall best student in her A-level examination result. Consequently, she gained admission to study Law at the prestigious University of Lagos, popularly known as Unilag. She obtained her LL.B (Hons) degree with honours at the University of Lagos in 1989. In 1990 Lorna attended the Nigerian Law School, Victoria Island, Lagos, and after completing the bar final examinations was called to bar as barrister and solicitor of the Supreme Court of Nigeria. Lorna is a Chartered Librarian and member of the Chartered Institute of Library and Information Professional in the United Kingdom. She is a member of CILIP Leaders Network in the United Kingdom. The author is a member of the Authors Alliance, headquartered in the United States. She is also a member of the British and Irish Association of Law Librarian (BIALL). Lorna adores preserving the memory of humanity, reviewing books and managing knowledge covering a wide range of subjects wherever possible.
LornaMarie is the writer of: The Judges and Lawyers Companion, How to write a good dissertation, a guide for university undergraduate student and The Power of words to the human spirit, soul, body and mind: a compendium of great speeches by world leaders and some landmark court judgement. She has inspired the young generation of writers at ‘meet the author’ events in schools, colleges and libraries. Lorna has a deep sense of humour. She is married with children.
