Posted in P.S. Barta, Political thriller, suspense, Washington DC on April 11, 2010

P.S. Barta has been telling engaging stories since childhood, when she often entertained friends and younger relatives with tales of mystery and intrigue. She then enhanced her skills through participation in live theatre, where she was nominated for a local acting award. Her professional life started with positions in visual arts, but soon included writing copy and promotional materials. Diverting into a career in computer support and training, she has returned to her love of stories with the publication of A Case of Intent.

Though she wrote the initial manuscript in 1999, she polished the story after living in Washington, D.C., while attending American University earning a M.A. in producing film and video in 2005. When not promoting her novel, she works as a media producer and freelance writer in the Indianapolis Metro area.

Interview with P.S. Barta

The author was kind enough to answer some of my questions, they must have been good because she said they made her think!

SBR: What made you choose a political thriller setting for your novel?

Barta: I didn’t set out to write a political thriller, the story developed into a political thriller early on as the story started being about lies, betrayal, and secrets – something I was working through in my personal life at the time. When a career in computer support and training ended I knew I needed to keep myself active so I enrolled in college to finish a degree abandoned several years earlier. I took a creative writing class. I was under deadline to turn in a major assignment, but hadn’t written a word, so I went to bed. That morning I was awaken by a police helicopter outside my eighth floor apartment searching the river below and the story started to form. This was 1999 when many were walking around mumbling ‘but he lied’ and a few months after the U.S. did close an embassy in Austria in protest of the Austrian Freedom Party. Facts connected, I tossed in some of my own experiences and love for Washington, D.C., and the story took flight.

SBR: Did you have to do a lot of research in writing the book?  And why did you wait 10 years after initially writing the story to seek in having it published?

Barta: I did do a lot of research or self education while writing this book. Since it was started in 1999, before the 9/11/01 attacks, and Internet sites were still new, I could get into the Center on Terrorism Research, CIA, State Department, British military sites, and get in-depth information. During a revision a couple of years ago, many of these sources have been closed down or are just PR. The library also had some books then on weapons, opera, books of names and the like. I also interviewed people with special knowledge as well as started my own poll on people’s thoughts on lies and how we deal with them.

As to why I took 10 years, I tried to secure an agent, or publisher several times between writing ‘the end’ the first time and when New Century agreed to publish it. Then while living in Washington, D.C. in 2003-05, through the Bush presidency, I sensed an undertone of unspoken discontent in the frequency of perceived lies by public figures and media. So I put a film project I was attempting to finance in the drawer and took out “A Case of Intent.” David Caswell at New Century liked it and by the end of the year we had it in print.

SBR: Is Nancy something of a psychic?  There was at least 1 reference to her ability that I saw in the book.

Barta: Nancy is spiritually aware, someone who lives her connection with the Universal Infinite or Source (God) and being so is connected to the energy that flows through, around and connects us all, and trusts her inner knowing and ‘real’ dreams. Those who are unfamiliar with this practice may call her psychic. But to me everyone has the ability to connect to this energy, through prayer, meditation and inner listening. Helen and Nancy attend a New Thought service — the winged planet is the symbol of Unity, headquartered in Kansas City, MO. , and the sermon is typical spiritual metaphysics.

SBR: Is Nancy anything like you?  and if so, in what ways?

Barta: Actually Nancy and the James brothers have elements of me in their characters. Nancy and I both have dark curly hair, larger frame, and have the ability to ‘connect the dots’ and question the environment around us. The James brother share my propensity to either play totally by the rules or play outside the line if the situation warrants it. However all three are different from me and have their own personalities, reactions, desires. It was strange how I was able to give them a base but soon through the telling of the story they all developed their own identity. Sometimes it felt like they were in the room recounting something they went through and I was only the scribe, the observer to their lives.

SBR: What author(s) influenced you growing up?  Did you have a favorite author, if so who?

Barta: When I was young my aunt bought me a card game called Authors. This game was a matching game and each card had an image and bio of notable authors from the ages – Nathaniel Hawthorne, Louisa May Alcott, Charles Dickens, Emily Dickenson, you can guess the list. A decade of two later I started watching movie version of these classic stories.  I loved movies from the first one I saw.  In many ways movies were the modern literature of the twentieth century. Of course I read some of these and other authors in school, then on my own. For a few years I started to travel a lot and decided to start reading on the plane. I started with the classics – and realized that the movie often didn’t give the book justice – then on to popular authors like Janet Evanovich, Tom Clancy, John Grisham, Dan Brown. Once I decided I wanted to publish, I started reading any first novel I could find. A favorite? No, it is the story and the story telling that I enjoy – the suspension of belief and this fictional dream that is created. If the author can stay true to the reality of their story and how they present it, then I enjoy it, take delight in it, and learn from it.

SBR: Who are some of your favorite authors today?  Do they fall into a specific genre?

Barta: Janet Evanovich and Charlotte Hughes for their “Full” series, the zany characters and comedy; I’m an Austin fan – both book and BBC…actually I enjoy the writing of television series, like “Castle” (Heat Wave didn’t live up to the show), the dialogue and characters work with the not too close look at the crime, so the comedy works, but enough mystery to drive the story. I appreciated series like “Gilmore Girls”, “Jag”, “NCIS”, “M.A.S.H.” Not authors who work on the printed page, but good storytelling just the same. Recently, a friend shared Noble Intentions by Katie Macalister, which I found enjoyable and intriguing. I also read a lot of non-fiction and how-to books, for research.

SBR: What advice would you give to aspiring authors?

Barta: Now that I’ve been through the process I understand that writing a novel is about passion – to either tell a story or make a statement or both. So if the would-be novelist doesn’t have a very strong desire to tell the story or make the statement, then he ‘will be writing a book’ for a very long time.

It is good to workshop your work, but you must temper listening to the workshop with following your judgment. Not to say there aren’t rules or requirements for good storytelling, and the first timer should learn to master these before he breaks them. But workshop participants, even the leader (who should be a published author with some significant sales in his library), come from their own skill set and likes. There often is someone who is nervous about sharing and will criticize everyone’s work to make an impression or feel his own worth. So listen, but evaluate their advice, try to understand what the more experienced people tell you.

Once ‘the end’ is written, and at least one revision completed, take a break from the story and clear your perspective. During this time you might want to take seminars, attend conferences, and read books on the publishing industry. This is also when you should plan out for yourself what it will look like if you novel is printed – who is the audience, regional or national, do you see this as a block buster or a quieter first book, are you willing to hold out for a full commercial publisher to pick it up or are you interested in subsidy or self-publishing? The more answers you write out, the easier it is in getting the right agent or publisher, negotiating what you want. When it seems right, go back revise again. Then start looking for an agent or small press. The book will never seem completed, and it is common to want to keep writing and revising, but resist. At some point every parent has to send their child out into the world, the same with a book. Can a book really be called a book without an audience, without having readers?

Now for the Review of A Case of Intent:

From the back of the book:  Detesting lies and attempting to change her life, Nancy Drew Peerson is now an intern for Washington National Opera, living in her godparents’ condo in Crystal City, Virginia, and working hard to suppress old habits. However the stranger she meets and events for the Blue Danube Recital will lead her face to face with her past, her identity, and the worst lie of all–the one to herself.

“A Case of Intent” weaves a story set in 1999 Washington, D.C., that follows a woman who has decided to change her life and career by attending a master’s program at American University. Leaving the world of undercover law enforcement, she had developed a disdain for any lie. The story is a dramatic telling of her attempt at transformation on one level, and at another level a study of lies and truth that we all encounter, leading the reader into an examination of truth — both factual and metaphysical — in our daily lives.

Normally I will breeze through books in a day or two depending on my schedule, however this book took a little longer to read (which is not a bad thing!).  There are several other story lines that are present in the first half of the book before the various parts start coming together and you get the full picture of what is going on in this novel.  This can be confusing if you aren’t paying attention, hence why it took a few extra days to read this book.  I liked that the main character, Nancy, was a confident women especially as you learned some details of her past.  There is a romance with one of the James brothers that seemed a little crazy at the start of the relationship.  The book is set in DC and Nancy is chasing her godparent’s dog and he manages to catch the dog until Nancy catches up.  He invites her to dinner in his home and she accepts.  While Nancy may have a certain awareness, was this really smart since she just met the man?  He could have been a psychopath…which really would have just been another twist to the story.  And yes I know, this is a novel and not real life but I seem to get wrapped up in the characters and what they are doing and how I would react if I were in that position.

As the author answered in the above question, there are lies all throughout the book.  These lies told to Nancy had an impact on who she was and what she decided to do with her life.  The lies also put her and others into unnecessary jeopardy.  Because it is a political thriller, some would probably say it is because it was for the security of the nation and others, but at what point does the lying stop?  And even if it was to protect Nancy, she is a grown woman that should be able to decide for herself.  Other characters realize this towards the end of the book that lying to Nancy just wasn’t a wise move!

I enjoyed the book because it really made me think and try to understand why things happen the way they do in government.  While this is a novel, I’m sure that situations like this do happen that the public does not know about.  If you decide to read this book, make sure you take your time to be able to understand all of the characters and the various subplots.

Read the first 15 pages here

The Giveaway

I am giving away the copy of the book the author sent me to review.  The contest is open to any US or Canadian residents and you can enter until April 25th at 12pm CST when I will draw the winner.

Gain an extra entry if you post about this on your blog, just leave that information so I can check it out.

Posted in Kate White, suspense on March 31, 2010

Kate White is best known as the editor-in-chief of Cosmopolitan magazine and several bestselling career bibles including Why Good Girls Don’t Get Ahead…but Gutsy Girls Do and 9 Secrets of Women who Get Everything They Want. Then in 2002 she decided to try her hand at mystery novels and scored a hit with If Looks Could Kill featuring Bailey Weggins. There have been several follow up books in the series which have also hit the bestseller list and the books have been optioned by Lions Gate Pictures.

In her new novel, she breaks from her series involving Bailey Weggins and introduces us to Lake Warren.  Lake is in the process of divorcing her husband and gearing up for a fierce custody battle.  At least she had a good job in a fertility clinic as a marketing consultant but a one night fling with the flirtatious Doctor Keaton turns her world upside down when he is found murdered and Lake fears becoming the prime suspect.  When things at the clinic get strange, Lake looks into the murder herself because somebody is hiding something…but she may be in for more than she envisioned.

My Review:

I could not put this book down, it had me hooked from about chapter 4 when Lake found Keaton murdered in his own bed.  As I continued to read I tried to figure out who was behind everything.  I would think it was one character or another at various times but I was never right and the ending was quite a surprise.  I do think that Lake put herself into more jeopardy than necessary by not informing the police of what had happened at various times throughout the book but understood why she may not have wanted to put herself under scrutiny by police that might act first and think later.

The Giveaway portion:

I have a copy of this book to giveaway to any resident of the US & Canada.  To enter, leave a comment with your email address, no email address, you aren’t entered!

You can gain a second entry if you have a blog and blog about it and send people here to sign up.  Leave a 2nd message with your blog info so I can check it out.

This contest will run until Sunday, April 11th.

Good Luck

Posted in romance, suspense on July 24, 2009

Explosion in ParisAuthor – Linda Masemore Pirrung
iUniverse
978-1440140747, April 2009
Right always wins out over wrong in the end
4 out of 5 stars


Linda Masemore Pirrung is the author of several romantic suspense novels including “Cracked Hearts” and “I Will Wait for You”.


“Explosion in Paris” is the newest romantic suspense novel from this author. Angie has been married to Mitch for seven years and of those seven, only the first year was a good one. Mitch has a very controlling personality and subtly forced Angie to resign from her job as a teacher stating that he needed her at home to maintain their home and assist him with his career as an architect. Eventually his actions over the years become those of an abuser, both emotionally and physically. Angie knows she needs to get out but doesn’t have the confidence any more to know that she can make it on her own. That is until a chance meeting with Ross. It started with Ross accidently wandering onto their property from the woods behind their home to a chance meeting at a local restaurant. From that moment on, Angie feels a kinship with Ross and they start spending more time together as friends which eventually turns into more.


During this time Angie thinks that Mitch doesn’t know about her friendship with Ross but she later finds out she is wrong. Mitch has a business trip to Paris and Angie must go along with him. Mitch has other plans for this trip besides business which include killing his wife in a boat explosion. What Mitch doesn’t realize is that Angie wasn’t on the boat when it exploded, that she managed to get off before that happened. The up side to this is that she is able to start a new life in Paris without Mitch, but this also means a life without Ross.


The story continues with her experiences in France, the messages she is sending Ross without him realizing it and how she confronts her past without having to forfeit her future. I don’t want to spoil the rest of the story so you will have to read the book for the rest of the details!


When I first started reading this book I wasn’t sure what to expect. At first I didn’t like the storyline because I saw that Mitch was an abuser and that didn’t sit well with me. But as I continued reading I saw that Angie blossomed from her friendship with Ross and that it was most likely that she would have left Mitch if he hadn’t tried to kill her. I was glad to see that Mitch didn’t escape punishment from his actions. There were times when I felt that the descriptive language could have been trimmed back and nothing would have been lost from the story or the imagery that the author created.


Overall I would recommend this book. The description on the back of the book does not do this storyline justice and I think you will be pleasantly surprised at all of the storylines come together. I also found it to be a fairly fast read and it was hard for me to put down because while I guessed what happened next in many places, there were also parts of the story that I didn’t see coming and it surprised and delighted me to read those chapters.


Reviewed for RebeccasReads (6/09)

Posted in suspense on February 18, 2009

Author – Melanie Dobson
Publisher – Kregel Publications
May 2008

Sometimes life is about more than what you can see
4 out of 5 stars

‘The Black Cloister’ is Melanie Dobson’s third novel with her fourth due out in 2009. She is married and lives in Oregon with her family.

This novel is about one woman’s search to understand her past and why her mother conceivably abandoned her. Elise Friedman is that woman and when she put these questions to her adopted father, Steve, he refused to answer why her mother died, where she came from and what she left behind. Does Steve have good reason for not telling Elise the whole story or is he putting her in harm’s way?

Because Elise can’t learn the truth, she decides to seek it out in Germany where her mother was from before immigrating to America. She enlists the help of her mother’s friend, and US Ambassador, Addison Wade. They meet for lunch with Elise hoping to find out some answers but all she finds is more questions and no answers. Addison is afraid of what will happen should Elise continue on and pursue this line of questioning. But is she afraid for Elise or herself? What is this secret?

So Elise continues on in her quest for the truth and meets Carson, a seemingly nice guy that wants to help her especially since she speaks very little German. She manages to get herself in trouble – what book wouldn’t be complete without this occurrence? What is The Chosen that she has learned about from the various townspeople? Will the group give her the answers she seeks?

I wasn’t sure what to expect since it is labeled Christian Suspense. What I found was a very engaging story about a cult in Germany and how one woman escaped and 15 years later her daughter – that she saved from the cult as well – ends back up there to better understand her mother. I felt the frustration that Elise felt when she would run up against roadblocks and couldn’t get the answers she sought. I was mad at Elise for putting herself in situations that she had to know was bad and might not escape alive. But in the end, I was pleased with how the story ends and that while cults are not a good thing for anyone, it is possible to escape them. I was also glad to see Addison Wade realize that sometimes a job isn’t the most important thing in life, a lesson we could all take something from, that life doesn’t stop just because of what you think is important. That sometimes helping others gives you a better sense of accomplishment and is more fulfilling.

If you like suspense novels you will like this book, it will keep you on the edge of your seats wondering what will happen next and how the story will play itself out.

Reviewed for RebeccasReads.com (2/09)

Posted in christmas, mystery, suspense on January 29, 2009


Author – David Morrell
Publisher – Vanguard Press, The Perseus Books Group
November 2008

And a child shall lead them
5 out of 5 stars

David Morrell is an award winning author for his novel First Blood in which the character Rambo was created. He has written other best selling novels such as Extreme Denial, Brotherhood of the Rose and Desperate Measures. He currently resides in Santa Fe with his wife.

‘The Spy Who Came for Christmas’ starts off with Pyotyr (aka Paul) running for his life in downtown Santa Fe being chased by his “partners” in the Russian mafia for a package that he took from the job they just started. The package turns out to be a child that is the son of a charismatic Palestinian, Ahmed Hassan, who preaches peace in the Middle East and is destined to change the future. Needless to say, Pyotyr’s boss is not happy that he took this child because those that want him have paid a pretty penny and they want him now and will not accept failure by those they contracted for the job.

The book starts off in the middle of the story and then goes back and forth to fill in the story until near the end where they only go forward. By doing this they really grab the reader’s attention because you wonder why this man is running through Santa Fe and you wonder what he is carrying and why.

As Pyotyr is running along the streets of Santa Fe, he has to find a safe place for him and the child. He stumbles across a residential community and finds a home that is occupied by a woman, Meredith, and her son, Cole, that are planning to leave her husband, Ted, because he is an alcoholic and a drunk. Cole is very protective of his mother and when he sees Pyotyr he thinks it is his father returning and is determined to not let Ted hurt his mother again. However, Cole realizes that this is not his father and manages to bring Pyotyr and the child into the house. This sets them up for potential danger should Pyotyr’s partners find him. Pyotyr manages to secure the house with the help of Meredith and Cole and while they wait to see what happen, he begins to tell the story of Jesus’ birth in the bible and the role of the Magi to Cole.

I truly enjoyed this book and the author’s spin on the story of Jesus’ birth and the possible role that the Magi had in helping keep Jesus alive and away from King Herod. It was interesting to see how the author took a story that we all know but in a different direction, that the Magi were spies (like the main character, Pyotyr) and perhaps their destiny was to keep the child alive.

This book is a fairly quick read and it kept me on the edge of my seat wondering if good or evil would prevail. The ending was a little bit of a surprise but it was a very good ending and I can’t see it turning out any other way now that I have finished the book. It is a combination of a spy novel crossed with a Christmas story and while it seems an unlikely combination, it works for this novel.

Reviewed by Leslie Storey for RebeccasReads (1/09)

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