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Excerpt – The Last Adam by Ron Echols

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Ron Echols’s The Last Adam blends contemporary life with an ancient struggle unfolding just beneath the surface. The story follows characters who slowly realize their circumstances are being shaped by something far older and far more powerful than they imagined.

Mary Levitt’s life changes abruptly when her pregnancy triggers violent attacks and unsettling visions that defy explanation. As these events intensify, it becomes clear that her child is connected to a prophecy feared by forces that have waited centuries for this moment.

Meanwhile, Joseph Riesman steps into a powerful development project only to uncover ancient movements working through modern systems of influence. What begins as obligation quickly becomes entanglement in a hidden war older than humanity itself.

The arrival—and devastating sacrifice—of the archangel Raphael exposes the scope of the conflict now surrounding them. Angels, fallen angels, and human agents move in calculated ways, watching and manipulating every step. Facing betrayal and spiritual warfare, Mary and Joseph must navigate escalating threats while protecting a life destined to reshape the world.

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Prologue

 

Location: The Lunar Surface, Tranquility Base, southwestern corner of the Sea of Tranquility.

 

The moon hung motionless, like a dead thing in the void of space. Its pockmarked exterior reflecting the sun’s merciless glare and millennia of asteroids pummeling its surface. In that airless waste where humans had once taken a small step, the lunar dust lay since undisturbed, marked only by boot prints and machinery left behind.

Piercing through the silence of the void, a voice called out.

“Raphael!”

A brilliant white light erupted into existence, hovering above the moon’s surface like a tear in the fabric of space itself. The light intensified until it seemed to bend space around it, taking form. A figure of a man emerged. Behind him, the first suggestion of wings. Translucent, but appearing stronger than steel, they folded against his armor etched with ancient angelic symbols that seemed to move when viewed directly. Dark hair, wild and untamed accentuated his sapphire eyes and caressed his polished, glass-like skin.

The being that called itself Gabriel stood motionless on the lunar surface, its feet leaving no prints in the ancient dust. The face that poets had tried and failed to capture for millennia turned slowly, searching.

“Raphael?”

The name rippled out without sound, more like a thought given form in the vacuum. Gabriel’s wings stirred restlessly, creating eddies in the dust that danced like spirits in the harsh light.

“Here, Gabriel,” reverberated a voice, bright but commanding, from theshadowed surface. Another angel sat casually reclined within the lunar rover, abandoned by the humans who briefly touched the face of Heaven before retreating to their warm blue marble decades ago. His eyes were fixated upon the Earth, suspended in the cosmic darkness. Raphael mirrored Gabriel, but

adorned in silver armor with fiery ginger hair framing his serene face.

“I’ve been searching for you,” Gabriel said, moving closer. In the moon’s one-sixth gravity, each step seemed to take too long, as if time itself was stretching.

“Observing,” Raphael replied simply, still watching Earth.

“Observing…anyone in particular?” Gabriel asked, also redirecting his gaze toward Earth. From this distance, cities glowed like constellations, tiny lights poking through the darkness that surrounded them.

Maintaining his stare, Raphael revealed what he had been witnessing, his voice heavy from countless years of disappointment. “There in Houston, a man, after a night of heavy drinking, returned home to engage in an argument with his wife, he killed her in a drunken fit of jealousy. Across the sea in Madrid, Spain, a young prostitute on the cusp of adulthood prepares to inject herself with an HIV-contaminated needle provided by a friend. There, in Manila, a corrupt politician embezzles funds meant for the poor, channeling them to fuel his business ventures. Wherever I look, human virtue becomes more scarce.”

Raphael shifted his gaze to Gabriel, his glowing eyes piercing the darkness. “Who is worthy down there? Even among ourselves, evil found a way to take root. We cast him down to Earth, and he has only brought misery and death upon everyone there. Since the dawn of humanity, the stain of evil has tainted them all. They have no hope.”

Gabriel hung his head in solemn contemplation of Raphael’s declaration. They both knew who “he” was. Neither needed to speak the name that had once been brightest among them.

“You have manifested yourself on the human plane of reality. What if you’re spotted?” Gabriel snapped, briefly changing the subject.

A small chuckle escaped Raphael’s lips. “I am on the MOON, Gabriel, not Times Square New York. Besides, you’re doing it too. Did you even hear anything I said?”

“We do not materialize on this plane without purpose,” Gabriel scolded. “And yes, I heard you. I came to you because I have news.”

“What news?” Raphael asked.

“Your complaining is timely for once,” Gabriel chided.

He stepped closer to the rover, standing beside Raphael. “You are correct; there is no one on Earth capable of saving them. However, he has devised a plan.”

Raphael peered up at Gabriel, rising from his reclined posture. “What plan?”

Gabriel leaned in, his voice whispering the secret. “He will go directly to them. He will send a part of himself to help them.”

“So, the time for final battle has come? He will lead us against the adversary?” Raphael asked, energy crackling around his form at the thought.

“No, this is not Armageddon,” Gabriel corrected. “This is the beginning. He will walk the Earth himself, using his own words, his truth, will be carried directly to them.”

Gabriel’s eyes widened. “That’s too much. They will panic at the sight,” he warned.

“As usual, you are not understanding. He will be born there.” Gabriel explained.

“What? Why?” Raphael’s bewilderment unusual for someone who existed since the earth was formed. “Become a human child? What could that possibly accomplish?”

Amused by the confusion etched on Raphael’s face, Gabriel continued, “He will birth himself into their world, experience their joys and their sorrows, breathe their air, and shed human tears. He will BE human. He says only then can he deliver what is necessary for their redemption. It is a necessary madness.”

“Incredible,” Raphael murmured, the word carrying both wonder and doubt. His gaze returned to Earth, that fragile sphere that held such consequence in the cosmic order. Resting his foot upon the rover’s steering wheel, he reclined once more, assuming his former pose, his mind wrestling with what he had just heard.

 

About the Author

Ron Echols is an ordained minister of the Gospel, an award-winning business executive, and a four-time Telly Award–winning producer. With The Last Adam: Resurrection Day, he makes his debut as a novelist, bringing a cinematic sensibility and spiritual depth to contemporary Christian fiction. A storyteller at heart, Echols blends suspense, gritty realism, and biblical prophecy to create modern retellings that explore enduring themes of faith, power, sacrifice, and redemption. Drawing from his background in ministry, media, and leadership, his writing places ancient truths into present-day settings where spiritual warfare unfolds alongside deeply human struggles. He lives in Texas, where he balances business ownership, community service, family, and writing stories designed to engage the imagination while stirring the soul.

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